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Bobbibrown
04-01-2009, 15:36
Noen som gidder å se over dette? Jeg er absolutt ikke flink i engelsk, i know :(

Anne was a thirteen old girl who lived in Germany with her family.
On her birthday, she got a red diary from her parents. She called the diary “Kitty”, and Anne writes in her every day.

When it’s became a war in Germany, Anne and her family moved into a building in Netherlands, were they would hideaway. They had helpers who should help them to get food, but they were often sick.
A night when they were asleep, it was a burglary down in the building. They couldn’t do something, because they were afraid of the police. It’s doesn’t happen something after the burglary, so they though they were safe. Anne had altered much after they moved in, and she was in love with Peter. It was difficult for her, because Peter was very shy. Peter and his family had search shelter with Anne and her family in nearly one year!

21. july 1944, they heard noise outside. It was the German police who came in to the building were they had hide themselves! They became disclose.

Her father Pim, was the only one of them who survived the war. He gave out Anne’s diary, and now it is a famous book.

lil_julie
04-01-2009, 15:39
Skal du ha oversettelse? Kort fortalt er det om Anne Frank såvidt jeg kan se...

Kan oversette det for deg, gi meg noen min...

lil_julie
04-01-2009, 15:40
eller rettet? Dobbelpost:p

Bobbibrown
04-01-2009, 15:42
rettet ja :)

lil_julie
04-01-2009, 15:51
Anne was a thirteen years old girl living in Germany with her family. (her er jeg usikker, ville omformulert hele setningen tror jeg)
On her birthday, she got a red diary from her parents. She named the diary “Kitty”, and Anne wrote in it every day.

When war broke out in Germany, Anne and her family moved into a building in the Netherlands to hide. They had helpers to help them to get food, but they were often sick.
A night when they were asleep, there was a robery down in the building.(her føler jeg også egentlig for å omformulere, klarer ikke helt og få denne til og stemme) They couldn’t do anything, because they were afraid of the police. nothing happens after the burglary, so they though they were safe. Anne had altered much after they moved in, and she was in love with Peter. It was difficult for her, because Peter was very shy. Peter and his family had search shelter with Anne and her family for nearly one year!

21. july 1944, they heard noise outside. It was the German police who came in to the building were they kept hidden! They became disclose. (?)

Her father Pim, was the only one of them who survived the war. He publishedAnne’s diary, and now it is a famous book

Noe sånt? Men hvilke klasse går du i? Jeg ser ikke mange skrivefeil, det meste går på formuleringen, og at du skriver med en norsk setningsoppbygning, noe som blir feil. Også bruker du litt feil\uvanlige ord noen steder. Men jeg er overhode ikke god i rettskrivning, være det norsk eller engelsk...

Men jeg er ikke sikker på om dette er veldig korekt. Slik ville jeg gjort det ivertfall.

Bobbibrown
04-01-2009, 16:20
tusen takk!:D
jeg går i niende :p

lil_julie
04-01-2009, 16:24
Hmmm..

Eneste du må tenke på er at jeg går VG1, og det som forventes av meg, og slik jeg formulerer meg, være det norsk eller engelsk, er nok anderledes en det som forventes av deg, fra engelsklæreren din.

RenateSJ
04-01-2009, 16:53
Peter and his family had search shelter with Anne and her family for nearly one year!


Hva vil du si her? had search shelter? Search er å lete...

lil_julie
04-01-2009, 17:02
Peter and his family had search shelter with Anne and her family for nearly one year!


Hva vil du si her? had search shelter? Search er å lete...

Hmm.. Den la jeg ikke merke til..

Had taken shelter?

goytil
04-01-2009, 18:18
Anne was a thirteen year old girl who lived in Germany with her family. ikke years